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Wow. this explains a lot. I always thought it's luck but your explanation makes a lot of sense. Thank you, Linda.

Here is my best-performing story: It has 3.1k views.

https://zora.medium.com/you-can-never-be-completely-free-until-youre-free-from-yourself-23494e90b196

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Thanks, Assumpta. There's an old quote that says "easy reading is damned hard writing." It's not wrong. lol.

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Sep 4, 2021Liked by Linda Caroll

Interesting. I'm a volunteer reading tutor for elementary school aged children and I've worked with teenagers in the past (albeit not tweens) so hopefully I benefit.

Though I have a very high reading comprehension level when I put in the effort, I have to believe it's worth it. For Medium articles, if it's harder to read than Harry Potter, it had better promise something great, otherwise I won't bother.

(None of my Medium stories so far have gotten over a thousand views, so I won't link.)

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You really nailed that -- if a piece of writing is hard reading, it had better be worth the read. A medical document about something I desperately want to understand might be worth the slog. A Medium post, not so much. lol

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Sep 3, 2021Liked by Linda Caroll

This was great!

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Thanks, Linda! Have a great long weekend.

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At the risk of sounding a little pretentious, I have a hard time writing simply! I'm still trying to find the secret to setting down the giant vocabulary monster in my head. And there's the tendency to over-explain. Any tips for that?

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I don't think over-explaining is a problem, just how it's done. Bill Nye the science guy does a LOT of explaining, but in a way that's clear and compelling. Know what I mean.

But yes, I do have a tip. Write two versions of a story. Take a story that didn't do particularly well. Then write it the way you'd tell it to a group of tweens. Talk at their level, spinning a story of it. Come up with a title that people can't "not" click. Republish and compare results.

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Great observations. I've been experimenting with short-form stories using different headlines to see how they perform. It's worth taking the time to tweak the title. But when I write a good story, a really good one, a catchy title feels weird. Here's my favorite (for now) short story. It is fiction, based loosely on a true event in my life. Thanks for your interest. - oh, it has 2.3k views so far. https://medium.com/illumination-curated/the-magic-scarf-667e5ba84c74

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Thanks Tree. Bet I'm going to find a ton of great reading in the comments.

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This is my best performing story to date 42k views. https://medium.com/boomerangs/the-one-thing-nobody-plans-for-when-they-get-older-2ded46f97540

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I read that one when you published -- not at all surprised it did so well. How did the Mata Hara one do by comparison? That one kicked some butt, too.

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35k on that one

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Depending on the number of replies I get, mind if I link both?

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Not at all. Thanks!

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Thanks!

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